Developmental Edit
Birthday Surprise
Full marked PDF with developmental comments in the margins. Identifying client details removed.
Good editorial work is about understanding what your story wants to be and helping you clear the path to get it there. Whether you are untangling a thorny first draft or preparing a manuscript for query inboxes and acquisitions desks, I offer rigorous craft-centered feedback that honors your voice.
from 0.5¢ per word a 80,000-word novel starts around $400
A reader's response, not an edit. I read the way your audience will and tell you where I was gripped, confused, bored, or unconvinced.
You get A letter of 1,500–2,500 words covering voice, pacing, character, and the places my attention drifted.
Right when You have a full draft and want to know whether it lands before you pay for an edit.
from 1.5¢ per word a 80,000-word novel starts around $1,200
A structural read of the whole manuscript against what you are trying to do with it, including where it sits in its genre.
You get An editorial letter working through structure, pacing, character arc, point of view, and market positioning, with specific passages cited.
Right when The draft is finished but something is not working and you cannot name it.
from 3.0¢ per word a 80,000-word novel starts around $2,400
The evaluation plus in-manuscript work: comments through the text, scene-level notes, and concrete suggestions for revision.
You get A marked-up manuscript, an editorial letter, and a revision plan ordered by what to fix first.
Right when You know the book needs restructuring and you want a second head on it while you do it.
from 2.0¢ per word a 80,000-word novel starts around $1,600
Line-level work for grammar, syntax, clarity, continuity, and consistency, to Chicago style unless you use another.
You get Tracked changes, a style sheet documenting every decision, and queries where a choice is yours to make.
Right when The structure is settled and the prose needs to be right.
from 1.2¢ per word a 80,000-word novel starts around $960
The last pass before it goes out: typos, punctuation, formatting, and the errors that survived every earlier round.
You get Tracked changes or PDF markup, whichever suits your production process.
Right when It is edited, typeset, and about to be published or submitted.
Quoted per project
Hands-on revision of passages that are not working — openings, transitions, dialogue that has gone flat — in your voice, not mine.
You get Rewritten passages alongside the originals, with a note on what changed and why.
Right when You know what a section needs to do and cannot get it to do it.
Editorial portfolio
Pull the drawer to open finished sample files — marked PDFs and manuscript downloads — so you can see how the work lands before we start.
Developmental Edit
Full marked PDF with developmental comments in the margins. Identifying client details removed.
Rewriting
Paid rewrite of mythology article copy. Download the edited manuscript. Client and publication anonymized.
This sample is a downloadable file — use the link above to open it.
On rates Baseline rates reflect standard Editorial Freelancers Association guidelines. Because every manuscript brings its own unique level of complexity, every formal quote is determined individually after reading your sample pages. You receive a fixed project total—never surprise hourly creep.
On timing Editorial turnaround depends on project scope, manuscript length, and active reading queue. Before any invoice or commitment, we'll agree upon a firm return date. If unexpected life happens, you will hear about it well in advance.
Tell me what you are working on and roughly how long it is. I will come back with a quote and a date.